Wednesday, 10 November 2010

Peer Feedback For Our Childrens Film Opening Sequence.

Conventions on opening sequence
  • Follows typical opening sequence conventions using establishing shot
  • Uses establishing shot
  • Establishes main character
Specific genre conventions
  • Follows fantasy genre with a talking box
  • Track shots
  • Good at establishing fantasy genre
Variety and quality of camera work
  • Good shots and variety of shots
  • Good use of shots to highlight action, could have used close ups
  • Good variety of shots
Use of special effects (animations)
  • Managed to make box look like its talking
  • Good effects
  • Good talking box however string was obvious
Sound
  • Clear sound throughout
  • Clear music but repetitive and gets boring
  • Clear soundtrack and fade
  • Bit jumpy but clear
Use of mise-en-scene
  • Location- college, where its meant to be 
  • Good use of surroundings and character props
  • Props- glasses, bag,talking burger
  • Costume was amazing
Editing
  • Good continuity
  • Good transistions and continuity 
  • Good continuity but could be a little smoother
  • Good continuity but could of used improvement
Best Features
  • Use of emphis, when he hugged the tree
  • Props 
  • Everything, mainly tree

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